On friday the 24 I went to Extreme edge.
when I got there we had to wait for my uncle because they were to busy watching the goatcars.
When they were were we were my brother said that one crashed into another one.
when they were here we went into the rock climbing.
when we went in there we saw different kinds of rock climbing.
there was a dinosaur bone one,a A B C one,a girl climbing a bat hill and she was a fake girl and there’s heaps more.
when they paid it first I went on the girl climbing the bat hill and I was scared because sometimes I am scared of heights.
When I tried it with my aunty and I was a little bit afraid of heights.
After that I went on the really hard one and that was the zigzag one.
I have done that one before and that was the first day when I went to rock climbing.
When I went on it I went right up top and I was not scared any more.
When I was really sweaty me and my aunty went to get a drink and then we went to go in the line and it was really long so we would come back and I thought that we had to put it back but she said that is alright so I drank it all up.
When we went to go my aunty forgot to pay and I said ant we going to pay and she said no and I thought that was sterling.
wow that a lot of information on you trip to the climbing edge
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Deletethanks kalahz for your comment
Deletenice job on retelling about trip to the climbing edge
ReplyDeletenice job on retelling about trip to the climbing edge
ReplyDeleteHello, Alyssa. WOW! Awesome retell! You must've had a great time at Extreme Edge. What was your favorite bit?
ReplyDeleteHi Tara thanks for commenting on my blog and my favourite part was the Extreme park
Deletewhen I was inside the playground and what I mean by that is there was this little door that you had to crawl under it and there was this fire place and you could climb up the fire place even there was a libary house too.
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